Today I did the second draft of analysis of information. Before, my analysis of information still in the format of questions and answers, but in this second draft, I changed it to essay form and reconstruct the paragraphs arrangements and some sentences and words. I also changed some words that are informal to formal and more concise.
The difficulty that I found was that to search the informal words and how to change it to formal words and more concise than before. I rarely write a report which uses formal language so it’s not familiar to me. I solved it by consider the suggestions that my supervisor had given me before which is to change ‘probably’ or ‘maybe’ to ‘I think’ or something that sounds more formal.
This leads me to have a better understanding about PP and its expectation which are to have an essay format report with formal language. This essay format report is also must following the MLA report format too.
A new perspective that could be investigated further through future inquiry to this topic is to learn how to do an exact MLA report format. This is what I can do differently.
The difficulty that I found was that to search the informal words and how to change it to formal words and more concise than before. I rarely write a report which uses formal language so it’s not familiar to me. I solved it by consider the suggestions that my supervisor had given me before which is to change ‘probably’ or ‘maybe’ to ‘I think’ or something that sounds more formal.
This leads me to have a better understanding about PP and its expectation which are to have an essay format report with formal language. This essay format report is also must following the MLA report format too.
A new perspective that could be investigated further through future inquiry to this topic is to learn how to do an exact MLA report format. This is what I can do differently.
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