5 March 2009

Today I received a suggestion from Ibu Tiwi. She said (through e-mail), “Before I forget (again), I guess it would be great if you put the pictures of you making your bag in the appendices."
This is a good idea because I can prove that I was really making my bag and to show the process of it. Actually I didn’t really think of it because I thought that the process and the progress we put it on the blog and not in the written documentation.

3 March 2009

Today I received feedbacks from Pak Agung, Bu Tiwi, and Bu Tisa. Bu Tiwi and Bu Tisa have a lot of comments of my draft of written documentation while Pak Agung is only an overall, so I can state his comments here:

“For Adela, I gave her 5
- Lack of references in her writing. Most of them are her own ideas.
- She put the process in the "analysis of information" instead of the "analysis of process and out come".
- Need more exploration of AoI aspect(s) during the process.”

The difficulty that I find is how to revise my draft; should I revise my draft one by one according to the feedbacks or should I put together all of the feedbacks at one and then revise my draft. I will solve this by revise my draft step by step according to each feedback. So I will work on the feedbacks given by Bu Tiwi first, then Bu Tisa, and then Pak Agung.

This activity leads me to have a better understanding about PP and its expectation that I must ask for different supervisors to check my draft of written documentation in order of accuracy and to achieve the highest grade.

1 March 2009

Today I made the second revision of my written documentation based on the feedbacks that Miss Alison and Ibu Lisa had given to me (I had submitted the first draft to them and I received a lot of good feedbacks and I need to revise a lot).

This activity leads me to have a better understanding about PP and its expectation which is we need to make the rough draft before we submit the final draft to our supervisor and to other supervisor(s) in order of accuracy.

I can do differently by asking other supervisors to check my rough draft and have their feedbacks so that I can revise my written documentation better to achieve the highest grade.