Today I revised my report so far and fixed some structures, grammar mistakes, informal words, and repetition. Beside that, I also consider the feedbacks that my supervisor had given to me the other day (Friday, 21 November 2008). The feedbacks that she gave me on that day were to put how the famous bag designers design their bag to add the ideas to my work and add the sense of professionalism to my personal project. This is a really brilliant idea that I can put into my work. Rather than I just design my bag by just using my sense of fashion, it is better to add this idea and have a bonus to my personal project.
So, I researched again and put it to my report and analyze it. The result of this analyze would be better with this idea.
I can do differently by survey the bags by myself such as to go to their stores and take a note of the bags’ characterizations and ask about those bags (such as the materials, etc.).
The new perspective that could be investigated further through future inquiry into the topic is to make my new design based on how they make their own design and to make or predict the new fashion trend for the new season (because every season passed by, the fashion trends are changing).
I can do differently by survey the bags by myself such as to go to their stores and take a note of the bags’ characterizations and ask about those bags (such as the materials, etc.).
The new perspective that could be investigated further through future inquiry into the topic is to make my new design based on how they make their own design and to make or predict the new fashion trend for the new season (because every season passed by, the fashion trends are changing).
