Today I revised my plans and reports. My supervisor (Ms. Alison) has a feedback for me that I should use formal language for my reports. For example, words such as ‘probably’, ‘maybe’, and others should change into ‘I think’ or other formal language.
The difficulty that I find is that to search for the non-formal words to formal words. I solved it by focus on each of the sentence and tried to search for the non-formal words used in there and changed to formal words.
This activity and my supervisor’s feedback lead me to have a better understanding about PP and its expectation that I should make reports with formal language because the IBO demands so.
I can do differently by ask someone else to check my reports and ask them if I use formal language or not and about the structures of each report.
The difficulty that I find is that to search for the non-formal words to formal words. I solved it by focus on each of the sentence and tried to search for the non-formal words used in there and changed to formal words.
This activity and my supervisor’s feedback lead me to have a better understanding about PP and its expectation that I should make reports with formal language because the IBO demands so.
I can do differently by ask someone else to check my reports and ask them if I use formal language or not and about the structures of each report.
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